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Maaz_Resume_FINAL_v3_actuallyfinal.pdf

This resume says “detail-oriented” three times and still spelled ‘Javascript’ two different ways.

Section by section

Formatting

64

Three fonts, two column layouts and a header that's 20% of the page. Bold choice.

Fix: One font, one column, name at 20pt max.

Experience

52

“Responsible for various tasks” is not experience. It's a horoscope.

Fix: Lead every bullet with a verb and a concrete outcome.

Impact & Metrics

38

Zero numbers. Not one. Did anything you did ever get measured?

Fix: Add a number to at least 3 bullets: %, $, users, hours saved.

Skills

71

Listing “Microsoft Word” in 2026 is the resume equivalent of “can breathe”.

Fix: Cut basics; group real skills: Languages, Frameworks, Tools.

Education

78

Solid. Though nobody needs your high school if you're in college.

Fix: Drop high school; add relevant coursework.

ATS Readiness

45

Your skills live inside a graphic. The robots can't read graphics. Neither can recruiters at 6pm.

Fix: Move skills to plain text; export as a simple PDF.

Top 3 fixes

Red flags

Email is xXcoderMaazXx@hotmail.com
Unexplained 8-month gap in 2025
Two pages for 1 internship and 2 class projects

Strengths

Real internship at a recognizable company
Projects with live links — recruiters love clicking things
Relevant CS coursework and a 3.6 GPA

Bullet rewrites

Before

Responsible for working on the company website.

After

Rebuilt the checkout page in React, cutting load time 40% and lifting conversions 12%.

Before

Helped with social media for student club.

After

Grew the CS Club Instagram from 300 to 1,800 followers in one semester with a weekly content calendar.

Before

Worked in a team to make an app.

After

Led a 4-person team shipping a campus food-ordering app used by 600+ students in its first month.

Missing ATS keywords

TypeScriptREST APIsUnit testingCI/CDAgileSQLGitAccessibility

Recruiter's 6-second take

“I see a student with a decent internship buried under a novel-length summary. I'm not finding numbers, so I'm assuming the impact was small. I skimmed past the skills graphic entirely. Maybe pile.”

Action plan

  1. 1Delete the summary paragraph; replace with one line: role + 2 skills + 1 win.
  2. 2Rewrite every experience bullet using Verb → What → Result.
  3. 3Move skills out of the graphic into a plain text list.
  4. 4Cut to one page — drop high school and the 2019 hackathon.
  5. 5Get a professional email address (firstname.lastname@).

Job match

You've got

ReactJavaScriptHTML/CSSTeamworkFigma

You're missing

TypeScriptTestingNext.jsCI/CD

Tailored summary

Computer Science student and former web development intern who rebuilt a production checkout flow in React (40% faster). Comfortable across the front-end stack and eager to ship accessible, well-tested product features.

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